Your statements that are supported with evidence and explanation demonstrate a good understanding of the controversy surrounding the 'rights and wrongs' of the death penalty. These will form a good basis for your court case. Those statements that are purely based on your opinion, and are not supported with valid evidence or explanation, are quite repetitive. You have mentioned the same point but re-written it on several occasions. It is important that you try to use the evidence to support your ideas and consider the 'facts' of the issue, rather than just your feelings. What is the national or global view?
Your statements that are supported with evidence and explanation demonstrate a good understanding of the controversy surrounding the 'rights and wrongs' of the death penalty. These will form a good basis for your court case. Those statements that are purely based on your opinion, and are not supported with valid evidence or explanation, are quite repetitive. You have mentioned the same point but re-written it on several occasions. It is important that you try to use the evidence to support your ideas and consider the 'facts' of the issue, rather than just your feelings. What is the national or global view?
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